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What to do if you have no idea of what you are gonna write in your RP

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Getting the hang of it ADMIN
Getting the hang of it ADMIN
Here you have two options.
1-Beg an admin to have to post less than 5 lines(BAD IDEA)

2-Find a way to post 5 lines.

SO here I'm gonna give you couple of tips to write 5 lines or even more.

1-Write about your character's feelings.If your character's angry, say that its face turned red.

Ex.:

This
Bob is mad

Can turn into this
After hearing what Jeremy said, Bob was angry. Bob growled to show him how much he was mad


2-Describe what is around you. Just saying that your character sees Caterpies eating leaves will add some more length.

So this:
After hearing what Jeremy said, Bob was angry. Bob growled to show him how much he was mad

Will now turn into this.
After hearing what Jeremy said, Bob was angry. Bob growled to show him how much he was mad. Bob did not cared about the scientist who was behind Jeremy and that was working at his computer. He was just wanting Jeremy to go away.

3-Add some words to enhance the feelings

This
After hearing what Jeremy said, Bob was angry. Bob growled to show him how much he was mad. Bob did not cared about the scientist who was behind Jeremy and that was working at his computer. He was just wanting Jeremy to go away.

Will now go to this:
After hearing what Jeremy said,which,for Bob, were tons of stupid things which did not make sense, Bob was angry. Bob growled as much as he could to show Jeremy how much he was mad. Bob did not cared about the scientist who was behind Jeremy and that was working at his computer. He was just wanting Jeremy to go away.Anyways, he did not cared about any member of Jeremy's team

4-Now just finish this off to finish with
After hearing what Jeremy said,which,for Bob, were tons of stupid things which did not make sense, Bob was angry. Bob growled as much as he could to show Jeremy how much he was mad. Bob did not cared about the scientist who was behind Jeremy and that was working at his computer. He was just wanting Jeremy to go away.Anyways, he did not cared about any member of Jeremy's team. Bob was hoping that Jeremy would run away so when he stopped growling, he stayed still to see what would happen next with jeremy

So With only
Bob is mad
We've got
After hearing what Jeremy said,which,for Bob, were tons of stupid things which did not make sense, Bob was angry. Bob growled as much as he could to show Jeremy how much he was mad. Bob did not cared about the scientist who was behind Jeremy and that was working at his computer. He was just wanting Jeremy to go away.Anyways, he did not cared about any member of Jeremy's team. Bob was hoping that Jeremy would run away so when he stopped growling, he stayed still to see what would happen next with jeremy

Use these tips and you should be able to get your five lines easily as normally, you won't only have Bob is mad. Don't forget that everything must go together and that you must not say what other did, like Jeremy ran away, it's Jeremy's choice if he runs or not.

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